Acoustic Sensitivity

Well, here's my idea. People can only normally post one story per day but there will be minimum points for it, say 30. Critics will have no automatic points at ...

I'm looking for someone to be my co-author or just to write up my story. I don't care if he changes it or add some of his ideas but I ...

Fireworks This time Is ending now... Lights it flickers right there Bright lights in our eyes Seem to bind us all We're shouting, "Come burn down for us there." You're ...

7/10 because it's good plus one since his Australian too. So the total is 8/10...XD!

Cool...9/10

"Great, now is my chance.", Auros reached in a small metal hidden inside one of his back pockets. He struggled for a moment then finally he got it. He then ...

Thanks... :)

Try to put some spaces between the stanzas so it could be read properly.

Are you talking to me, mate? Me and my gir...ehem...friend. XD! ---------------------------------------- "Those who can’t do, teach. And those who can’t teach, teach gym." - Jack Black

Coffee Guess where I am now. Waiting alone Choosing coffee in a shop Proving life's not fun when you're gone So this is my first time It has not been ...

It's kind of hard to critic lyrics that is 4 lines short but since you said that this is the chorus then I guess it's fine. One suggestion, when you're ...

It's a nice song but it's like it is meant to be fast. It's like a rap song. It kind of reminds of Linkin Park.

Arrange your lines and put at least a space within the dialogue because it's kind of hard to read. Also put a margin on the first lines of each paragraph. ...

Escaping Chaos Nobody told you. A victim here lies awake Faintly breathing But still lucid The debris close us in But this pen and paper are my savior now From ...

Wow, Your poem is very...I don't know...heartwarming? But really it looks like it came straight from the heart. It was simple but the message and your feelings is here.